I am a Year 4 student from Aotearoa New Zealand. This blog shows my learning journey so it is not perfect. Please comment on what I did well and what I could do to improve.
Friday, 1 September 2017
As Jack lumbered across the icy ground it was a very cold night.So Jack sterd at one spot nearest to a mountain in the snow boom bang a massive meteor came dashing at hem. Suddenly a huge moon came down from the sky noo noo! Said Jack there are aliens trying to kill Jack. Jack said to himself as the aliens gan up on Jack “god help me” said Jack.will he ever kill the aliens. hi Bloggers hope you enjoyed reading my writing
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Hi my name is Lucas and i thing you should add a title so people know what you are writing about and you now that Mrs Kingston
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