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Friday, 1 September 2017

The walking dead





This week we have been learning about DASH? paragraphs for adventure stories.
  • D = describe the setting
  • A = use action
  • S = use speech
  • H = describe how the character is feeling
  • ? = use a cliffhanger or rhetorical question

We wrote collaboratively and used a writing frame for this learning task, then we wrote our own paragraphs today.











As we walked into the bone-chilling forest, they could see hundreds of tall gum trees surrounding a haunted house. Suddenly there was a zombie coming out of the house and then ten more appeared. “What was that?” asked Bob “Zombies! Run for your life!” said Marke. Bob stood still with his heart beating a look of terror. Will they survive?